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Friends and Enemies – Discussion

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    Anonymous

    Hi guys,

    I’m writing a book based in the world of Formula One. However, I’m not posting the story in this thread, I’m posting it in one just called Friends and Enemies. This is because i don’t want the story thread to get cluttered, so please only discuss the book here. So this thread is for discussion and not for the story.

    Thanks, and I hope you enjoy it.

    #174578

    Nic Morley
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    Read and really enjoyed it. You’ve got some talent. Every sentence just mae me wanting to read more, don’t know but I found it interesting.

    Keep up the good work! Lookforward to chapter 2 :)

    #174579

    Anonymous

    Haha fantastic! Thankyou very much and Chapter Two will hopefully be up next week.

    #174580

    Stephen Jones
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    love it! can’t wait to see how khan goes!

    #174581

    BasCB
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    Nice Idea, I will have to take some time to read it.

    #174582

    Mark-L
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    Although i have read it in school i enjoyed reading it again.

    #174583

    Ell
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    Very good Daykind, can’t wait for chapter 2

    #174584

    shadow13
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    Very good first chapter. Looking forward to chapter 2.

    #174585

    Felipe Bomeny
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    Good job, daykind! I look forward to reading the whole piece!

    #174586

    Anonymous

    Thanks for all the nice comments guys! Hopefully chapter two will be up by the end of this week.

    #174587

    damonsmedley
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    I actually liked it! This Indian sounds a bit arrogant though! :P

    #174588

    Fixy
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    When I saw how long it was I admit I didn’t want to read it :P But as I read the first line I wanted to read on and on until I finished Chapter 1. I agree with Damon Smedley also! Great read!

    #174589

    Felipe Bomeny
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    @damon Smedley

    Hey- Naweed may be from Pakistan, Bangladesh, or even the Maldives! It’s possible because there’s already a Paraguayan world champion ;D

    #174590

    Fixy
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    At 10.48pm, inside the MET office, Josh Kelly is startled to hear his door smash shut. In it is Pyramid Racing team principal Adam Christensen.

    What the fuck do you think you were doing? You werent telling anyone about the deal!

    Oh, this is getting interesting!

    Also, wasn’t Kahn from India? Now he’s from Pakistan!

    And the Italian driver named Gianluca, you’ve put Allesandro as surname (then misspelled as Allessandro), but just to let you know in Italy there is Alessandro which is a name, and may be a surname.

    #174591

    Anonymous

    Ok, thanks Fixy. I’ll bear that in mind for the nexr chapter.

    But I don’t tgink I said what nationality Khan was in 1st chapter, but if I did, then it was a mistake.

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