I’m writing a book based in the world of Formula One. However, I’m not posting the story in this thread, I’m posting it in one just called Friends and Enemies. This is because i don’t want the story thread to get cluttered, so please only discuss the book here. So this thread is for discussion and not for the story.
Thanks, and I hope you enjoy it.
Read and really enjoyed it. You’ve got some talent. Every sentence just mae me wanting to read more, don’t know but I found it interesting.
Keep up the good work! Lookforward to chapter 2 :)
Haha fantastic! Thankyou very much and Chapter Two will hopefully be up next week.
love it! can’t wait to see how khan goes!
Nice Idea, I will have to take some time to read it.
Although i have read it in school i enjoyed reading it again.
Very good Daykind, can’t wait for chapter 2
Very good first chapter. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Good job, daykind! I look forward to reading the whole piece!
Thanks for all the nice comments guys! Hopefully chapter two will be up by the end of this week.
I actually liked it! This Indian sounds a bit arrogant though! :P
When I saw how long it was I admit I didn’t want to read it :P But as I read the first line I wanted to read on and on until I finished Chapter 1. I agree with Damon Smedley also! Great read!
Hey- Naweed may be from Pakistan, Bangladesh, or even the Maldives! It’s possible because there’s already a Paraguayan world champion ;D
At 10.48pm, inside the MET office, Josh Kelly is startled to hear his door smash shut. In it is Pyramid Racing team principal Adam Christensen.
“What the fuck do you think you were doing? You weren’t telling anyone about the deal!”
Oh, this is getting interesting!
Also, wasn’t Kahn from India? Now he’s from Pakistan!
And the Italian driver named Gianluca, you’ve put Allesandro as surname (then misspelled as Allessandro), but just to let you know in Italy there is Alessandro which is a name, and may be a surname.
Ok, thanks Fixy. I’ll bear that in mind for the nexr chapter.
But I don’t tgink I said what nationality Khan was in 1st chapter, but if I did, then it was a mistake.
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